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It's a good idea but to my mind sounds a bit like a section of something bigger rather than an entire piece. The rhythm in the lower strings gets a bit repetitive, and also the melody instruments seem to take it in turns, one a time waiting patiently for their turn. It might be good to have some polyphony in the parts so that you can build up the texture a bit which will also give it some direction.

I hope that doesn't come across as too critical as it definitely does have potential.
If you fancy having a critique of anything of mine that would be fab, Skeleton march is probably the most closely related to this kind of thing.

ET16 responds:

Yeah I've having trouble with this song when it comes to keeping it away from the repetitive side I'm thinking completely scrapping the solo string part after the horns and replace it with something else. Thank you for the review I'll try to add some polyphony into the song and see how that works

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